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The pain unrestrained,
The bane of hate,
Catharsis without end................

Bottomless abyss without sound,
The deepest chasm frought with your iniquity
And your lies...........

The sepulchre of all the love given to you,
The love that you chose to render broken,
Forever..............

When your world ends,
And you long for the sun............
Who will forgive you??

Forgiveness without trust......
Ever again..............
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This is a poem that I'm entering in :iconamayasfantasy: contest.

I haven't written publicly in a while, and this has a very important connotation for me.
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Thank you..... :blush:

This is based on a real person too. :tears:

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Lilies forever......
Betrayal is never an easy thing to get over
Great work

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"Mum says 'Its not right to hit'.........but mums not HERE!" :slap:
Thank you! :hug: It's based on a true event... :(

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Lilies forever......
its beautiful! Thank you so much for your entry and good luck!

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In my own salvation
And your eternal slumber
Legend shall speak
Of sacrifice at world’s end
The wind sails over the water’s surface
Quietly, but surely
~ Loveless


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That is really good!

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"When a human has someone hes gotta protect...his power grows exponentially" => Swords Of An Honorable Ruler
Thank you. We'll see! ;P

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Lilies forever......
Thank you! :blush:

I do appreciate it. :hug:

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Lilies forever......
Sorry to hear that.

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"Mum says 'Its not right to hit'.........but mums not HERE!" :slap:

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